Draft 1 Is done. For PDF click the picture.
I shoud really dedicate this one to Zak Smith, David Weaver and Phil Spitzer, who's time I wasted by dicking around and failing to manage my time properly.
(Oh its really fucking long, like 17 pages)
(Oh its really fucking long, like 17 pages)
I like it and am listening to Grieg's Piano Concerto in A minor op. 16 as I peruse it again. Some thoughts;
ReplyDeletePerhaps it is the music but the whole thing has the impression of one of those artsy stop-motion animation films with the peculiarly surreal and otherworldly character -a little bit cute and a little bit haunting.
the voice like water pipes, the kamikaze dwarf king seeking his beard and the 2-D dog are all great images (though not the only ones).
The monsters are characteristically off-the-wall strange to an extent that I don't think anyone else quite nails.
Have you run any of this Veins stuff yet?
Oh and find/replace duregar/duergar if you feel the need to cater to pedantic aspie types.
DeleteThanks Tom. I havent tested anything yet. Will look into the misspelled dwarves.
DeleteI am very late to the party on this one and the link doesn’t seem to work. Anyone still have the pdf?
ReplyDeleteIf you look down and to the right in the 'Drive of Free Stuff' its in there.
DeletePerfect, thanks
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