Thursday, 12 August 2021

Trailing Corposant 3 – Fulgrim

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Ok now on to the post. Click the 'trailing corposant' tag to see the previous posts in this series about me reading the entirity of the Horus heresy Series.

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The next four books are frankly, all over the place as the Heresy Series goes into what will be one of several wild tacks back and forth, a lumbering freighter which has lost its course.

 Lets just talk about Fulgrim.


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 Place yourself in the Black Library offices. You’ve finished planning the initial trio of books. The Heresy should be in full flow. Maybe one or two have come out and are doing well.

 What comes after that initial trilogy? Horus has fallen, the two sides are at war. That war is ten years long and covers the galaxy. What do you do next? How will you approach the rest of the series?

 Graham McNeils answer – tell the story of Fulgrim and the fall of the Emperors Children to Chaos, would seem like a good idea.

 Some people like this book, I found it pretty bad.

 

 

 

 

Fulgrims as Fiasco

We will start with a look at the character as he is published chronologically. Because this one is pretty interesting.

  

2002 - Index Astartes 1. The Proto-Versions of Fulgrims discovery and his uplifting of Chemos.

  

2007 Fulgrim -  (HH Novel). The Big Main book that all the others end up responding to. Fulgrim starts dating a hot sword and falls to chaos. Ends with; ITS NOT FULGRIM ANY MORE A DEMON IS POSESSING HIM??? GASP. Yes OG Fulgrim is now trapped in a painting.

  

October 2011 -  Auralean (HH Novella). Only a brief peek in this one as Lorgar works out Fulgrim is a demon; OK SO FULGRIMS STILL A DEMON HERE RIGHT?

  

May 2012 - The Reflection Crak’d (HH Novella). This is the one with the Torture Apple and the anal violation. Fulgrims kids work out that its not really him in that body as he has been acting weird, even for him, so they decide to BDSM the truth out of him.

 BUT it turns out that he is actually into that shit, and apparently also it is really him – he used cleverness to get his body back and was deliberately acting not like himself in order to teach his sons a lesson or something, apart from some behaviours which were apparently actually him.

 So he’s not a demon any more, but he’d like to become one, so we are off to..

 

October 2012 - Angel Exterminatus (HH Novel). Fulgrim teams up with Peter Turbo to find some incredible super-weapon (‘Turbo being insanely into superweapons is a theme with him), but it is all a cunning trick and Fulgrim was actually just planning to ascend to being a Demon Primarch, which he does.

Ok so now we have demonic, snake-bodied, shapechanging but NOT possessed Fulgrim from this point on and he remains relatively stable (from our point of view).

  

May 2014 - Vengeful Spirit (HH Novel). Horus uses his noted supercharisma and military genius to persuade his junkie brother to actually be useful in the Heresy for once.

  

March 2017 - Gathering Storm: Rise of the Primarch; (Campaign Guide). I haven’t read this, apparently F’Grim turns up in the ‘current year’ to dick Robute about and then just wanders off.

October 2017 - Fulgrim: The Palantine Phoenix (Primarchs Series Novel). Josh Reynolds gets a crack at F’Grim in a prequel story telling us something about the Fabulous One in the time before his fall seemed inevitable.

  

December 2017: Fabiuls Bile: Clonelord. Josh Reynolds again. This is a complex one, details at the end.

  

August 2018 - Slaves to Darkness (HH Novel). Horus is having a meltdown so Lorgar takes a shot at taking over the Heresy. As part of his plan he goes to hell and uses cunning to drag Fulgrim back-to-Reality-ope-there-goes-Gravity.

  

March 2018 - The Ancient Awaits (Short Story). Another post-Heresy story where Fulgrim meets a dreadnought of one of the Loyalists he sent to die on Istvaan III and gets a bomb in the face. A moment so epic fans made their own song about it

 


 enjoy that before GW finds a reason to take it down.

 

  

May 2019 - The Solar War (Siege Novel)

October 2019 - The Lost and the Damned (Siege Novel)

March 2020 - Saturnine (Siege Novel)

Fulgrim at the siege of Terra is basically vibing.

 

 

To Summarise;

McNeil makes what may be one of the most epic misfires in the entire Heresy followed by one of the most agonising and strangely arranged attempts at a recovery. 

He ends his first story, and our first extended story about Fulgim by ‘black-boxing’ the main character. As whacked-out and wasted as Fulgrim is, he still can’t bring himself to kill his best friend Ferrus so at the climax of the book he gives up and surrenders his body to his addiction demon. Fulgrim is trapped in a painting and the Demon is now in charge. It was the demon who actually strook the blow that killed Ferrus. An important point. 

(Of course we, reading later know that black-boxing is reserved for the Emperor and Horus, the other characters have to remain, well, characters.) 

After three or four years in real time, possibly because he’s writing Angel Exterminatus and has realised that, since Fulgrim is in it, he needs Fulgrim to be an actual character, and also that, since its based around Fulgrim trying to become a Demon Prince, he needs to not already be a demon at the start of the book as that would be mental, McNeill decides to solve the Fulgrim issue. 

So in May 2012 we get ‘The Reflection Crack’d’, where an anal torture scene reveals the truth… But think about what an incredibly strange way this is to write these events. What we learn is that Fulgrim has escaped from demonic imprisonment, forced his possessing demon into the prison instead, but is now super pervy and wants to be a demon himself. 

We see absolutely none of this from Fulgrims point of view, instead we get this very strange story where the person you though was someone but suspected wasn’t turned out to in fact be the same person you originally assumed they were. 

Things stabilise for the rest of the Heresy with him being a talented flake who generally doesn’t want to be there and has to be coerced or persuaded for each performance. He has no further character development or decay. (Apart from Josh Reynolds ballsy attempt at adding depth in ‘The Palantine Phoenix’). 

Yet for most or many of the key moments of Fulgrims development and change, we either don’t see the events directly or Fulgrim is in some sense ‘absent’ within his own story.


 

Fulgrim as Character 

Fulgrim; School-Star 

Fulgrim lands on a resource-poor planet ruled by aristocratic corporations, grinding work and despair where everything is slowly falling apart. 

Three people find him. One is so freaked out that he wants to do away with the child, so another kills him (bad sign), but Fulgrims arrival breaks open the rock and releases a spring of pure water on a planet where this is treasured and rare (good sign). 

(His name means ‘water-bringer’, something he shares with Lorgar, who also fell onto a desert world and was named ‘Rain Bringer’.) 

In childhood and adolescence, Fulgrim works feverishly to rescue his world from its doom, and does so (so far as we know) with nothing but technical knowhow, charisma, politics and hope. Almost the ideal of the Emperors vision for a reunited mankind, he achieves what a few other Primarchs have, and does it without genociding or nuking anyone. (Even Corax had to nuke a few people.) 

We don’t see this story. Its  only revealed through memories and articles in old HH lore. 

Assuming this lore remains true, this is Fugrim unquestionably at his best, with all his virtues working to the max and most of his flaws accounted for by poverty and lack of resources. In these circumstances he truly is a Phoenix; hope from hopelessness. 

But our story begins, both chronologically and in-world, past this point. 

What happens to the Phoenix after that initial re-birth, when it is just sort of hanging around? What happens to the High-School football star after school ends, and they need to enter the real world?

  


 

The Football Star Has Cracks 

 

Fulgrim has a lot of flaws disguised as virtues, and a LOT of insidious problems in his legion which he either doesn’t know about, doesn’t really process or just chooses to ignore. 

In his post High-School arc things seem to start well. 

 

Luv me Emprah 

Fulgrim thinks E-Money, his ideas, his big plan, Fulgrims place in it, and pretty much everything he does – is and are FUCKING AMAZING. 

Admittedly its hard not to think that when the Emperor is staring you down as his presence distorts reality itself, but Fulgrim really really thinks that. And the Emperor thinks it right back. 

“You are great, you are the best, I am going to base my life on you” says Fulgrim to the Emperor. 

“No son,” says the Emprah, “You are great, you are so great in fact here, name your legion after me and wear my special symbol to show just how fucking special you are. NO-ONE ELSE GETS THIS SPECIAL BADGE FULGRIM YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE.” 

 

Gene Seed Problems 

Someone is clearly not a fan of the Third Legion. A weird and mysterious “accident”, (unusual in the Heresy series in that there has not been a short story about it involving time loops, demons, “you made your own future” themes, mysterious aliens, the Selinar Gene cults or anything at all really), takes place which wipes out most of their gene-seed. 

Worse, they have a mysterious blight or flaw which is corrupting or destroying what remains. This legion seems doomed.  

 

Fabius 

Apothecary Fabius decides to save his Legion (and himself) using whatever it takes. A repeated theme with the Astartes since all of them have some kind of flaw or problem and if you want to keep a legion going then often someone needs to do whatever it takes. 

This ultimately involves Fabius grinding up his dead bothers and snorting them in order to stay alive, Fabius has the Blight too, and though he can retard its progress, he can never entirely cure it. 

The few remaining Astartes from this generation suspect that something is up with Fabius, but he is an unquestioned genius and a vital resource. The ‘Spider’ squatting there at the centre of the Legion, acts as an accelerant for the corruption to come. 

 

Small Legion 

The Third Legion is therefore very small, nearly wiped out in fact, so the remaining legionaries are treated a little more like air-force pilots than standard expendable grunts. They are very much not expendable. In fact they are massively over-trained and upskilled compared to other legions, and very well looked after. 

They are also massively traumatised by their near-extinction, and have a collective small-man syndrome at an epic level due to having a legion of like 200 guys. Even the Thousand Sons have a thousand sons. 

 

Noble Seed 

They are also recruited from the Noble Families of Old Terra. This is a common tactic of the Emperor to simultaneously co-opt, neuter and possibly destroy potential sources of resistance. Having your children selected to become Astartes is an “Honour” and clearly indicates your loyalty and integration with the new Imperium , but effectively it cripples your gene-line by removing most of the vital young men. Men are pretty replaceable in general, but the Astartes process is very flesh-hungry and many cultures in the Heresy are nearly destroyed by over-recruitment, accidentally in some cases, and in some, very deliberately. 

A lot of the 3rd legion are from wealthy noble houses. Raised to rule and have good taste even in the short years before they were made supermen. 

Very, very different to Fulgrims initial social milieux. The school hotshot from the small town won’t be working his way up from nothing, he arrives in Harvard, spending time with the genetic and social elite. 

 

 

No Longer Number #1 

The hyper-talented boy from the small town is no longer easily the superior of anyone he meets. He has 19 brothers, many of whom are better than him at stuff. Not the best technologist, (Ferrus), the best politician, (Robute) the best military strategist, (Horus) or even the most Handsome! (Sanguinius). 

The guy who was best-at-everything, and for whom this was a huge part of his identity, is now very-good-at-a-range-of-things. 

He does have one friend though, which is nice, a hyper-masculine equally-weird obsessive. 

(Fulgrim and Ferrus is Guts and Griffith and no-one will convince me otherwise.) 

All of this is fascinating character development and a deeply interesting look at the nature of character and how flaws can become virtues and virtues flaws as circumstances change except that ALMOST NONE OF IT IS THE DIRECT SUBJECT OF ANY OF HIS BOOKS. 

Good news for weirdoes like me who get off on assembling the ephemera of imaginary paracosms into coherent wholes. Bad news for normies who just want to see things happen. 

 

 

Sex n’ Gender 

Did you know Fulgrim actually got married back on Chemos? At least a couple of times. These were largely political marriages made to cement alliances. 

But, Fulgrim was very young when the first of these happened, and Primarchs can take some time to work out just how different they are to everyone else. They learn facts and skills quickly but they don’t develop emotionally very quickly. He is rather coy when questioned about them. 

So did Fulgrim actually have feelings and relations for these early marriages? 

Did Fulgrim have sex with a girl? I think this is the only Primarch who is suggested to have any kind of Heterosexual relationship with anyone. Later on in ‘Palatine Phoenix’ he has something of a flirtatious relationship with an intelligent and crafty old woman who might in some ways be an intellectual equal at this point in his development. 

Its not really deeply described or looked into but the nascent concept of Fulgrim being someone capable of, and desirous of, actually emotional and physical intimacy with the opposite gender, is a fascinating one. It adds to and in some ways, makes more horrific, the loneliness of the Primarchs and of their Astartes ‘sons’. Most GW lore has Space Marines just generally uncomprehending of sexual intimacy but there is an unspoken possibility that one reason for the alienation of the Fulgrim and the Third Legion might be a sense of loss for an experience and capability most of them would barely be able to conceptualise emotionally. And then its translation into its own nightmare version as they turn into perv-monsters. 

Of course we can’t have books about that because the middle-range of the I.Q. graph and the GW marketing department are VERY insistent that “Slaanesh isn’t just abuuuut seeeexx ducch kindofabadloooooook”.  

 


 

The Palatine Phoenix 

A book good enough that its worth mentioning on its own. 

We get a look at Fulgrim at the exact mid-point between his obsessions and flaws being functionally useful, and him having edging towards some kind of breakdown. 

Fulgrim is so obsessed with building a name and independence for his Legion that he decides he is going to take a planet with a small group of men and some political bullshit. 

In later records this is portrayed as a supreme and brilliant victory. In Reynolds story it is shown as a near-catastrophe in which Fulgrim consistently underestimates or fails to understand the nature and quality of his opposition. He nearly gets blown up by a nuke, ends up brutally grinding his way through a scrum of opposition, ending up covered in their blood and gristle, his legionaries leave themselves open to possible defeat through grandstanding. 

His ‘victory’ is much much more of a mess than it seems or is later presented as. 

Worst of all is the failure to learn. 

The planet in question is home to a complex philosophy which is all about dealing with the drive to perfection and understanding and channelling those urges into pro-social conduct and self-knowledge so that those who strive for greater things do not ultimately become the very monsters they sought to displace and defeat. 

The book ends on a vaguely hopeful note in which Fulgrim acknowledges his need to keep learning and developing… 

Which he definitely does not do. 

This book, in 2017, is the end of Fulgrims personal pre-Heresy history (which we didn’t see most of), and the start of his cracked-up Heresy persona, which I found to be much less interesting as a whole, though he is still a lot of fun. 

 


 

The Football Star Tries Crack 

Graham McNeill is here! Bodies will be oiled, hair will be perfumed, sculptures will be smeared in poop, concerts will be had and love will definitely not blossom. 

The Third legion is noodling along being almost-tolerable with their entourage of hipsters when they encounter a planet of pervy snakemen and decide to take them out. (The planet has cool floating islands so the Cogboys want it). 

Unfortunately, the snakemen are wanking themselves off to a demon trapped in a sword. Fulgrim clearly has almost no idea about demons or warp infection and so kills the snakes and takes the sword. This is shooting up Heroin but with no idea what Heroin is or even that it exists. Also this Heroin is intelligent and wants to addict you. 

What follows is broadly similar to ‘False Gods’, with one paragon marine (here Tarvitz rather than Loken) and a handful of relatively-sane Remembrancers experience the Third Legion turning into Epsteins Island. 

There are many good scenes in the book, and many good concepts, and some good characters, but I did not find it to be a good book. 

The demon in the Laer blade posing as part of Fulgims own character, then intrusive thoughts, then outright madness, is neat, the addiction-for-Primarchs stuff is good. The end is mental. 

 

 

 

Fulgrim: What the Fuck is Going On 

A brief period, already described in ‘Fulgrim as Catastrophe’ in which our boy is bounced around a bit and then the whole mess is papered over – HES A DEMON NOW OK???? 

 


 

“Because I Got High” - Fulgrims Heresy Adventures 

Fulgrim in the Heresy has one overriding goal – to become winged snake-man and bang Demonettes in hell. He achieves this pretty quickly and in every other instance basically gives few to no fucks about anything that doesn’t look like immediate fun. 

In ‘Angel Exterminatus’, Fulgrim tricks Pertuabo into helping him become a Demon Primarch. This done he fucks off to the Warp to bang Demonettes. 

(Despite genuinely trying to kill Peter Turbo and then ending up under his (very nominal) command in the Siege,  this isn’t really brought up much ever again. Perhaps Perty is just too generally bitter against everyone to focus on it.) 

In ‘Vengeful Spirit’, Horus butters up Fulgrim with “You’re so pretty, please come to the Heresy” so Fulgrim can use TIME LOOPS (just time travel in this case) and an EXTREMELY OBVIOUS SNAKE CULT,  to infiltrate the ruling caste of a planet he wants to invade. Fulgrim then fucks off to bang demonettes in hell. 

In ‘Slaves to Darkness’. Lorgar goes to hell and stops Fulgrim banging demonettes, using sneaky demon-binding to drag him back to reality as part of a disastrous scheme to take over the Heresy. Horus immediately subverts that scheme, beats up Lorgar like a Nelson beating a Millhouse, and kicks him out of the Heresy. Fulgrim sticks around as Horus is just about charismatic and powerful enough to compel him. 

In the Siege of Terra Fulgrim largely primps around in holo-casts being a slightly gay panto villain as he is written by average writers until ‘Saturnine’ (Siege Novel published March 2020), when he is still a panto villain, but written by a better writer. He orchestrates a super-attack on the Palace walls, is nearly victorious and fights Rogal Dorn in a duel which Dorn wins despite Fulgrim being an insanely good duellist even when just a Primarch and now being an extra-fucking-good duellist because he is a fucking four-armed demon-snake largely because Dorn is being written by Dan Abnett. 

Its implied that if Fulgrim had really pushed the attack he might have won anyway, but as he got dinged up in the duel he no longer gives a shit, leaves his ‘inner circle’ to get roflstomped by Dorn and Sigismund and literally thrown off the palace wall, and once again fucks off, either to bang demonettes in hell or to grind up the population of Terra and snort them. Terra being a Cormac McCarthy novel by this point he can do both at once. 

And that, so far as has been thus written, is the end of Fulgrims military usefulness in the Heresy. 

Except during the Scouring where he fights Robute Guilliman and easily cuts his throat with a super-poisoned blade, sending him into a 10,000 year long coma, but then leaves, presumably, again, to bang Demonettes in Hell. 

 


 

Fulgrim in the Dark Millennium 

Fulgrim pops up here and there with small mentions in books.  In ‘The Ancient Awaits’ (Short Story published March 2018) he meets up with a buried dreadnought he left on Istvaan and gets bio-nuked. In ‘Gathering Storm: Rise of the Primarch’ he turns up to deliver a panto villain speech to Robute again. 

The only really interesting look at him is, again, from Josh Reynolds. 

In his Fabius Bile series Fabius gets his hands on a perfect uncorrupted clone of Fulgrim and is given the chance to raise him and maybe correct a past which once went wrong. 

He doesn’t, probably couldn’t have anyway because he’s a psychopath and for Fabius at least, overcoming the ‘addiction’ of his Primarchs charisma is what passes for character development. 

Yet we do get to see a young, vital, idealistic and earnest baby Fulgrim roaming around trying to fix everything and help people, (in this case, horrible mutants). And while being raised by a high-I.Q. madman, he is so-far non-chaotic and in fact regards chaos the way a five year old boy regards kissing girls. 

He just wants to fix a broken galaxy, and begins to do so, starting from the very bottom… 

This strange distant shadow in time is the only direct look we get at the School Star when he was still in school. 

It is likely the last we will see as Reynolds no longer works with Games Workshop. 

 

 

Sadness 

Perhaps it’s appropriate that for a story about the school-star gone wrong, the truly heroic and bold acts of the character are hidden away, rarely directly observed. 

The great series of books and short stories; 

“Fulgrim Saves Chemos – without Genocide! Fuck Yeah!” 

“Fulgrim Meets the Emprah and Impresses the SHIT Out of Him!” 

“Fulgrim Meets Ferrus – Now Best Buds!” 

“Fulgrim Escapes the Painting! Give-Me-My-Body-Back-You BITCH!” 

“Fulgrim bangs Demonettes in Hell“ 

None of these exist.  They are faded memories and imaginings, the stories of the school star quarterback soaking himself in a near-empty bar decades later.

 

 

Tuesday, 10 August 2021

I AM PIMPING MYSELF OUT

 


The MARKETING BEAST HAS WHISPERED TO ME



I HAVE BEEN GIVEN THIS SACRED GLYPH

WHAT DOES IT MEAN? NONE WHO LIVE YET KNOW OR DARE TO DREAM

BUT WE WILL FIND OUT TOGETHER 

I AM NOW AVAILBLE FOR

 INTERVIEWS, 

PODCASTS, 


WHATEVER...

So long as it comes out before the Kickstarter ends in early September.

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I NEED ATTENTION GOD HELP ME





Monday, 9 August 2021

GOALS AND STUFF

 I can't even begin to explain the day I have had. So many tasks that I had to get up, do them, go back to bed for 1o minutes to calm down and then got up to find more tasks.

It has been brutal.

Our Kickstarter passed its initial goals though so here is an image to commemorate that.




More coherence tomorrow hopefully.


Saturday, 7 August 2021

Demon-Bone Sarcophagus is LIVE!







WHAT IS DEMON-BONE SARCOPHAGUS?

There is an extensive description on the Kickstarter but I will summarise here.

Its a D&D adventure by Scrap Princess and Patrick Stuart!

The PC's stumble across the aftermath of a massacre conducted between different groups of conspirators. Unbeknonwst to the conspirators, this particular clusterfuck took place above a buried tomb.

During the battle, great holes opened in the earth. Various members of each faction fell into the holes, leapt in to escape, or went in following those escapees.

Now members from all groups chase each other around the Tomb, disturbing its traps, its ancient guardians and getting ever-closer to the DEMON-BONE SARCOPHAGUS.







The book is in the same style as Deep-Carbon Observatory. Not quite a sequel, or even necessarily located in the same continuity, but there are points of contact between the two.

The format is the same; an A4 hardback, and the delivery system, printer etc, are all the same.
It will take longer to reach you than DCO did.




THE ESTIMATED PRODUCTION SCHEDULE

Due to (ARGUABLE) "flaws" in DCO, we are investing in a proof-reader and a layout "polisher", which takes time, so we hope to get this to you early in 2022. A fuller schedule in on the Kickstarter.




BROKEN FIRE REGIME

Its been brewing for a while.

This interview from 2015  STILL WORTH A LOOK! 


Like any great trial, or at least like most of mine, when its done there is a sense of anticlimax. Its hard to believe, after so many years that we are actually there and it is really taking place.

But we this is not the end, or the beginning of the end. It is the end of the beginning and yes I know I'm quoting Churchill you don't need to point it out in the commnets.

Imagine yourself as bloated and sanguine studio executives, or, more accurately considering social change, lithe, vacant and glass-eyed executives laden with data. 

"The system is dying" you rumble and whine one to the other, "nothing can save us now."

Then you wait, grow frustrated and say it again; "I SAID NOTHING CAN SAVE U..."



Yes, tis I, old Patrick Stuart, grown all-too corporeal from a year in lockdown, bursting through the studio door with a THREE-BOOK SERIES!!!

THAT'S THREE YEARS OF KICKSTARTERS PEOPLE!

UNLESS THE FIRST ONE FAILS...

OR THE SECOND ONE FAILS..

HUZZAH! WHATEVER REMAINS OF THE OSR IS ARGUABLY SAVED IF IT WASN'T BEFORE

Prepare your soft bodies for the most epically epic epic that ever bloated its way into the noosphere. A tale so FAT we had to grease it just to get it through our brains.

ONE DUNGEON CRAWL???? DID YOU THINK THAT WAS IT YOU POOR FOOLS????

THIS IS ONLY THE BEGINNING!

In fact, Broken Fire Regime will be one bigish dungeon crawl, a groundbreaking sandbox/heist/disaster movie/heartbreaking hard-hitting COMMENTARY on BAD POLITICS.. 

(Yes! Brutal and unrelenting debt-slavery combined with murderous work conditions, drug additction and a dab of racism, could these things somehow be WORNG?????? Finally someone in RPGs is taking the risky stand against things we all think are bad that the CULTURE has been waiting for, and made a CORPORATION, the bad guys. .... or ARE THEY????????)

Because the last part is a mysterious mystery slash Court Drama slash Chivalric ballad slash THRILLING DENAUMANT in which at least some of the stuff you did waaay back in the beginning becomes SUDDENLY RELEVANT as the PCs are plunged unto the PLANE OF FIRE ITSELF.

And if we actually manage to produce all of these, and they actually work, they should all be in your hands by 2024? Then I guess I can start work on LITTORAL STORM CORSAIRS, the 'Air' part of the Earth/Fire/Air/Water series.
 
Or maybe Lanthanum Chromate, who knows..

So get ready to SMASH THAT LIKE BUUUUUOOOHHHGODIHATEMYSELF

BUT I HAVE TO GO ON! AND IF I HAVE TO YOU GODDAMN HAVE TO AS WELL!

NO ONE IS GETTING OFF THIS BUS TILL I DRIVE IT INTO THE SEA FAR BELOW SO SMASH THAT FUCKING LIKE BUTTON BITCHES BECAUSE A KICKSTARTER IS ON AND HMRC WANT THEIR MONEY BACK

SMASH SOME FACKING GOALS








Trailing Corposant 2 – The Tower

(Better read this quick as later today I'm launching the Kickstarter and will have to do a slightly boring marketing post for that). 


2 False Gods - Graham McNeill - June 2006

 3 Galaxy in Flames - Ben Counter - October 2006

 4 The Flight of the Eisenstein - James Swallow     - March 2007

You think you know who you are and what your values are, but what happens if your entire social matrix, everything and everyone you thought you believed in, falls away, at first slowly with a sick sliding, and then into a sudden abyss?

You are left alone, in total darkness, without meaning, with no future and all of your previous actions cast into mockery, degradation and manipulation.



In False Gods Horus falls awkwardly to Chaos and over the next few years perverts his own and others legions to his new cause, attempting to backstab the still-loyal elements in a master-stroke that devolves into a bloody fiasco.

Galaxy in Flames and Flight of the Eisenstein follow, respectively, Saul Tarvtz and Nathaniel Garro two paragons space marines (paragons 2 & 3 by my count)  of the now-traitor legions as Horus’ manipulations put them in the same position he was in, with everything and everyone they know, turning against them and the central meaning of their lives falling to dust.

Look, what if you came back from a holiday and your previously normal family had joined a Satanist cult and were now willing to kill you unless you joined. And you realised this at the exact moment your mum tried to stab you but she fucked it up so now you have to fight her in the Kitchen.

In-world the events run from 02 M31 to 05 M31 – only a few years from Horus’ fall to the Fiasco of Istvaan III. In our world this runs from April 2006 when Horus Rising was published through to March 2007.

There is a general descent in quality over these books, though per-heresy, none are truly awful.

 

 

False Gods - Graham McNeill

Horus is lured to the spooky planet of Davin, and then to its even-more spooky moon, by the story of an old friend turned traitor. There he meets his old pal who has turned Nurgly and is bonked by the Anathame Erebus stole from the Interex two years ago, (the sword itself actually has its own micro-arc in the Heresy series.) His main guys take him to the spooky magic and clearly-evil Serpent Lodge, the Chaos Gods show him visions and turn him to their service.

Horus has now fallen and will be doing Chaos-stuff from this point on.

A few fragments of note;


Horus Dum

Horus, a noted hyper-charismatic military genius, is very very dumb in this. His Captains are also dumb.

Why? Chaos power acting on him? His actual core personality revealing itself since, with the Interex, he has experienced a personal failure and lost some faith in his dad? Bad writing? Too-good writing from Dan Abnett in the previous book as he is not much of a Lunar author and almost all of his main characters tend to re-set to something like the anglo masculine ideal?

As with all things in the Heresy, the instability and corruption of the world portrayed and the sketchy writing and characterisation blend together.


Time-Loop Retcon Bullshit GO!

The Chaos Gods are pulling Horus about his timeline in a way which seems to be actual near time-travel. In particular they pull him back to the theft of the Primarchs, and in some way his presence there seem to trigger this

Keep a track of how many different people and groups are ultimately meant to be present at and partially responsible for, this event, because it builds up over time. I think in the end there are three or five if you count the Emperor and the Chaos Gods.

 

The Black Box

Horus & E-Money both end up in the black box. Characters seen through inference whose true nature is so hidden, possibly so multiple and perhaps so differently related to time that they cannot be ‘known’ in ways we understand.

Plus, their head-on books are not that great considering they are core characters. Horus Rising is ok but his character goes a bit tits-up in False Gods. As for ‘Master of Mankind’, I have a reeeeeee coming for you.

Most of their interesting characterisation comes from fragments in other book, and from working out their nature through their relationships with other people, nd the pattern of their actions.

They are shadowed persons.


Why Turn Evil Though?

Why does Horus fall? I addressed this at length in the last review so I will summarise here.

·        Fear of death.

·        Comedown from the absence of dads super-charisma.

·        Increasing awareness that his dad deliberately lied to him or at least held back vital info.

·        Remember the Thunder Warriors.

·        Becomes aware of own arguably part-demonic nature.

·        History of dominance, victory and hyper-competence lets him think he can control this.

·        Alienation from humanity through being a *fundamentally Other* thing.

·        “Hans, are we the baddies?”

·        Fear of losing. To die is one thing, but to die as a sacrificial pawn after being set up by dad?

Few of the other tempations to chaos we will look at here, and in later posts, have to deal with quite this *volume* of causes. But a lot of them have to deal with most, in particular fear of death, alienation from humanity, history of dominance and shame.

The breadth and scale of the Heresy and its deep involvement in minutae let us look in depth at the lives of these fictional supermen. We can trace their actually-gestalt personalities back and forth and find the roots or the first murmurings of choices and behaviours long before they reach a tipping point.

Like any deep structural look at complex events, it leaves the viewer, well, something of a structuralist. When we see every impulse and every micro choice that shaped the tipping points we classify as ‘decisions’ it begins to feel impossible that anyone could have made any other choice than the one that they did.

It’s a limited mono-dimensional view of the possibilities of free will though, to consider it existent only at singular points of binary decision. Instead we might think of free will as a gardener, a distant planter which influences strongly which micro-decisions, (often made in moments of true chaos, or at-that-time seemingly-irrelevant randomness) become the ‘seeds of time’. The potentialities for new actions.

The Gardener can plant many possibilities, a few will grow, of these, the Gardener, the free exercise of will, cannot decide exactly *how* they will grow, cannot control the suns, rain, pests or soil, and so it may seem the will is powerless.

But this ‘Gardener of Decisions’ does influence things somewhat, through its part of its tragedy that the point of its strongest influence, the seeding and arrangement of new possibilities, takes place so long before they bear fruit, and in the first cases, so long before the Gardener actually *knows anything* about life, that this power is exercised almost blindly.

Still, the Gardener can prune, shape, feed, pick off bugs, re-pot and in extreme circumstances cut down and root up. Free will is still exercised, even if when we point to any particular branching or flowering of any plant and say; “Look, how did free will decide *this* flower at *this* particular place?” We cannot answer.

Yet still the will is present in all the slowly-growing garden of decisions, and even its absence, should be choose not to exercise it, is but the shadow of Free Will.

tldr; Horus was a flake.



Galaxy in Flames – Ben Counter

From our point of view this is a conspiracy movie. For Horus & crew, it’s a Coen brothers movie. Their scheme goes horribly, horribly wrong.

It’s been two or three years since the events of the last book. Horus intends to lure all the loyalist members of the Luna Wolves, Death Guard and Emperors Children to the surface of Istvaan III and then to virus bomb them into extinction.

A simple plan.

Keeler and Co work out something is up and, guided and aided by proto-Saint magic, they subvert one of the few remaining half-loyalists on the Vengeful Spirit and escape

[Side note – like many “bad-guy castles” in fiction, this hyper-militarised demon-guarded doom-ship and axis point of a galaxy wide insurrection turns out to be pretty permeable to anyone who wants to get on or off, and its inhabitants largely unconcerned with this.]

Meanwhile, Saul Tarvitz of the Emperors Children, is in the Robert Redford/Tom Cruise role, works out that “this one goes right to the top”, finds out about the Virus Bombs and races into the bomb zone to warn the loyalists.

This is essentially a choice to die. A pure act of defiance.

Enough loyalists survive the bombing to be a problem and before Horus can crack the planet open from orbit with more bombs Angron ‘Leeeroy-Jeeeenkins’ his way to the surface to kill them by hand. Horus has little choice but to back him up and now it’s a ground war.

Tavrtiz is a fun character to read but from memory, not that interesting to analyse. Why does he not turn evil? Well he’s just a really good guy, like Loken and Garro.

For the Emperors Children he’s slightly lower-class and, perhaps crucially, not exactly unambitious, but humble. As in genuinely humble. He knows he can never match wonderful Fulgrim but believes there is meaning in reaching.

“The true hero is always becoming.” As I once read somewhere.

Or, from Gene Wolfe; “Its natural that you should call me a hero, but if I ever genuinely thrugh of myself ‘now, I am a hero’, I would be a kind of monster”. [Quote is from memory].

Also, I don’t think Saul ended up going to the Planet of the Spooky Sexy Snake-Men where the rest of the Legion inhaled the crack fumes of chaos for the first time.

Probably the most interesting element of Tarvitz story for analysis is his friendship with Lucius, a classic Emperors Children hyper-focused mega-talented psychologically-fragile narcissist. Lucius ends up on the shit list because he’s friends with Tarvitz and he’s friends with Tarvits because Tarvitz will actually broadly tolerate his bullshit. Ultimately Lucius betrays Tarvitz, maybe the only person who was ever actually his friend, only partly due to his fear of death, but largely because the other (doomed-to-die-soon) loyalists, see Tarvitz as the Main Hero of the resistance.

Lucius just can’t stand not being the Main Character and he wants back in with his crackhead friends. It’s a pleasingly mediocre and emblematic arrangement of flaws.


 

Flight of the Eisenstein – James Swallow

Our first look at the Death Guard and Paragon-character mark… three? Nathaniel Garro.

‘Straight-Arrow Garro’, essentially the Captain America of the Death Guard. Luv me Emprah, Luv me Primarch, ate me treason, ate me xenos. Simple as.

Garro is injured and so can’t be sent to the death zone of Istvaan II without arousing suspicion

Mortarion sticks him on a frigate with a second who is ordered to kill him as the bombs drop. (This assassin, Grulgor, has an entire Heresy arc and even turns up as a demon prince in later books despite dying here, at no point is he very interesting).

This goes wrong. Garro escapes, along with Keeler and Sinderman. (A big element of the proto-Inquisition and Proto Imperial Church in one place). They have a nightmare journey through the warp but eventually meet Rogal Dorn who nearly punches Garro’s head off for the news he brings.

Rogal having a genuine uncomprehending meltdown when he hears about Horus’ betrayal is one of his most deeply humanising scenes. “My brother is an honourable man!”

In a long coda to this story Garro and his men are quasi-imprisoned on the Moon because no-one knows what to do with them. Garro fights for the soul of one of his men infected with Nurgles plagues and then battles him in warp-form on the surface of the moon.

The book ends with Garro fully, totally, committing to belief in the Emperor as a God. After the madness of Istvaan and watching his own legion purge their brothers with virus-bombs, escape, fighting Grulgor, the fucking warp, fighting Grulgor again as a demon-thing, living through the slow failure of the Eisenstein and his near suicidal decision to detonate its warp engines, being castigated and in some sense blamed for the message he brings, being imprisoned on luna, losing the soul of one of his men and finally fighting a godammn demon on the fucking moon, Garro has had enough, he needs Space Jesus!

I’m reminded of the low level culture war skirmish over religious disaster survivors; with the survivors often claiming that god brought them through the chaos and angry atheists online pointing out all the other people who died and the obviously random chaos of the event.

Two mutually incoherent value systems and two entirely, overwhelmingly different experiences arguing with each other.

Living a thing is quite different to knowing of a thing. A simple concept to consider but agonisingly difficult to unpack.

When its your life on the line.. yes but that’s only one element. The threat to your personal life is an intensifier and, yes, a primary source of stress. But its not just about the danger of death but the annihilation of context and the delicate tracery of human meaning around you which, up until that point, seemed both eternal and inevitable.

The disaster, in this sense, is a tearing away of the skin of reality, showing an older, deeper reality beneath which requires an entirely different philosophy and sense-of-reality to process.

“The roaring of lions, the howling of wolves, the raging of the stormy sea, and the destructive sword, are portions of eternity too great for the eye of man.”

Wednesday, 4 August 2021

Sunday, 1 August 2021

Trailing Corposant – I READ THE HORUS HERESY

If there is one thing I would like people to understand about the Horus Heresy series it’s this; there is an extended scene in which one of the main characters is anally violated with a 'Pear of Anguish', by his children, and he's into it.

 That's not really representative of the series or meaningfully informative, I just really had to get it off my chest.

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Yes, the legends are true, I have indeed read or listened to the audiobook of EVERY SINGLE Horus Heresy book which has been published as of this date.

Yes, even the Primarchs series.


Two years ago I did a post about every book I had read to that point. I don't want to just go over the same gags and the same analysis again.

My original plan was to go through the books from beginning to end, writing about what came to mind as I thought of them and anything I had been able to glean from them.

That is still somewhat the plan but thinking about the first book brought to mind the deep structure of the series and that brought other things to mind and so on, so I ended up writing a longish essay just about this one book.

Don't worry, I am not going to do this for every book in the series, nevertheless, this is going to have to be a sequence of posts rather than just one long one.



 

 

1 Horus Rising - Dan Abnett

 I re-listened to this one more recently. Its pretty good. I’m still not sure it would make a blind bit of sense to anyone who didn’t know anything about 40K.

 People; we meet the ‘main cast’. Loken, the Mournival, sneaky Erebus, the Iterator Kiril Sindermann, who might turn out to be the first Inquisitor, and the Remembrancer, Keeler, who may one day be the first Imperial Saint.

 We sort-of meet Horus. Abnetts way of capturing a superbeing is to pull a kind of multi-camera Rashomon thing where everyone gets fragments of interactions and we have to infer from these what is on the Primarchs mind. This remains the best way of writing about them as the series goes on but is gradually set aside.

 Loken encounters a demon but Horus tells him not to worry its just a warp-based predatory information hazard.

 Our merry Xenocidal and occasionally Genocidal crusade fleet meets the anti-Chaos multi-species Star Trek Interex people who are chill and who know exactly what Chaos is.

 The Imperial people definitely do not know and Horus, whatever level of knowledge we might assume him to have, clearly doesn’t know nearly enough.

 No-one trusts anyone else but just as the Interex are about to explain to Loken, maybe the only Luna Wolf who would directly meaningfully understand what they are on about, what chaos is; sneaky Erebus does a war crime, stealing a super-chaos sword, and murdering breaks out.

 

Minor Things;

 Are the Kinebranch aliens chilling with the Interex the Jokero? The Demiurge?

 

 

Big Patterns

 

Conflicts Across Time

The Emperor and the Chaos Gods are both reading the future and trying to make their preferred version the one that happens.

 The Chaos Gods, and, increasingly, the Emperor, are also present in the deep Warp, meaning they exist somewhat outside of time. This means their influence can cascade back in time and arrange events so their preferred state of being exists.

 They are also both trying to trick and deceive each other about what they are going to do and about which futures are likely. 

 

Multi-Conscious Beings

Relatively minor non-god characters can ‘divide their minds’ and commit themselves to plans which they themselves do not directly consciously know. This gets confirmed in the most recently published book; ‘Alpharius: Head of the Hydra’.

God-level entities can be assumed to have multiple layers or divided sections of selfhood, all prosecuting plans and desires which themselves have feints, multiple fallbacks, etc. They are all trying to fool or provoke each other into over-reaching and making themselves vulnerable.

  

Defeat Inside Victory, Victory Inside Defeat

A pretty common tactic for both the Emperor and the Chaos Gods is to, at the point of your opponents greatest commitment to victory in a high-intensity struggle, use that moment of distraction to hide away some strand of fate or consequence which will give you a big strategic benefit later on.

 

 

The Binding of Isaac

So, why did the Emperor set up his sons to fail? Why did he send them off into the Galaxy with the instruction of “get worlds get worlds get worlds”, without telling them about Chaos, without telling them exactly what they were and in fact, leaving the more psycho ones fully in charge of their legions?

Probably, the Primarchs, and to a lesser extent, the Astartes, are poisoned traps. Irresistible bait for Chaos.

E-Money knows he made them out of Chaos Juice he got from the Big 4, probably after promising them he would make mortal part-demon stable supersoldiers lead by bound-demonic bioweapons and use them to burn the Galaxy.

Of course he was lying to them and they were lying to him and he knew that they knew that he knew that etc etc etc.

The combination of the Imperial Truth dulling the power of Chaos, with more and more worlds being taken all the time, plus E-Money on Terra getting close to accessing the Webway, means Chaos must be under some kind of actual threat. The speed of the thing means the Gods have limited time to act.

E-Money knows they will try to take back their children and he is hoping that by seeming to limit their window of opportunity on them he can get them to *fuck it up*.

Which, to be fair, they nearly, and in a handful of cases, actually, do.

But even if the Chaos Gods do succeed in taking back their children, its likely that they will still be poisonous to their interests in some way. Likely E-Money intends to use the Primarchs to poison the Chaos Gods with humanity, not turning them good, but splintering and limiting their power through their obsession with controlling these Demon-Child Primarchs and via the effect of the Primarchs personalities on the Gods themselves.

God calls out for Abraham to sacrifice his only Son, and Abraham did fill his Son full of spiritual roofies and did sacrifice him, and knocked God the fuck out, and took His stuff.

Its possible that E-Dawg put Horus in position to fall precisely because he really liked him, trusted him, and thought that at the last moment he could bring him back, thereby making him a future super-weapon against Chaos.

 

 

What is the Horus Heresy a Story About?

A Father who abandons his sons?

The paradox of Sacrifice.

The actual binding of Isaac is a strange story. Though a lot of Bible stories are. God demands that Abraham be willing to sacrifice his own son, that he love and fear god so totally that he will not only murder a child whom we presume he is fond of, but in terms of the culture of the day, destroy his own future, his own continuity and the hope of everything he has lived for going on into the future.

And Abraham is willing to do this, and prepares and begins to do it.

Then God says “Ok, that’s enough.” The will to do it is sufficient. So long as you are willing, absolutely willing to do it, you don’t have to do it.

In the Horus Heresy is actively trying to destroy the Gods. To do this he steals their power and uses it to make sons. Whatever his plan with these sons, to conquer the Galaxy and install the imperial Truth, or some deeper more complex scheme, his final aim is not in doubt; destroy the Gods.

What the Emperor actually feels about his creations is hard to tell, but the most reasonable reading of the texts suggests that he genuinely likes at least some of them.

It’s also reasonable to say that he sends them all, the ones he likes and the rest, out into a dangerous situation, deliberately under-informed, with the full knowledge that something is probably going to go wrong, though he doesn’t know exactly how or when.

There they are, like bait dangling in a stream, false sacrifices.

He doesn’t intend to give them all up, or possibly even think he will have to.

Still, ultimately, he knows he will lose a few, and this is part of the design. They have been set up to fall, to be taken back by the Gods.

One strong reading of the Jesus story is about the end of sacrifice. A core tenant is that, as Jesus sacrificed himself, there don’t need to be any more sacrifices to God, neither animal or man, that period is done.

Jesus was another somewhat-mortalish creature composed of Godpower. In his case the Deity sent a part of themselves, perhaps knowing that he would suffer and be sacrificed, arguably as a point or bridge of understanding between God and Man.

The Heresy is something like an inversion of this. Again, the part-god sacrifice, but in this case Nietzschean man forms the part-God sacrifice as an act of trickery.

The result is Nightmare Stasis – the Kali Yuga forever, or at least 10,000 years. The Gods cannot consume reality as they desire, but man, all of man, suffers terribly